Confessions of a Stripper
In case you were wondering, no children were harmed in the making of this strip.
Originally, I conceived the cartoon as a traditional four-panel job. However; as I was sketching it out, I felt the beats needed to be broken out and given their own panel--especially the final panel where Rufus sees that he is holding gasoline. And, being that this is a webcomic and I am not restricted by newspaper space, I decided, "what the hey," and gave it more room.
I also had some punchline retort from Rufus in the last panel, but decided to let the visuals stand on their own. My wife--my indispensible sounding board--constantly reminds me (and rightfully so) to use less words, to strive to work the dialogue down to its bare essence--a cartoon haiku, if you will. As a result, you now have a silent penultimate AND ultimate panel.
I'm not sure if you agree with my decision or not, but here it is--such as it is. As you can tell, in this cartoon I was channeling my inner Tex Avery.
Originally, I conceived the cartoon as a traditional four-panel job. However; as I was sketching it out, I felt the beats needed to be broken out and given their own panel--especially the final panel where Rufus sees that he is holding gasoline. And, being that this is a webcomic and I am not restricted by newspaper space, I decided, "what the hey," and gave it more room.
I also had some punchline retort from Rufus in the last panel, but decided to let the visuals stand on their own. My wife--my indispensible sounding board--constantly reminds me (and rightfully so) to use less words, to strive to work the dialogue down to its bare essence--a cartoon haiku, if you will. As a result, you now have a silent penultimate AND ultimate panel.
I'm not sure if you agree with my decision or not, but here it is--such as it is. As you can tell, in this cartoon I was channeling my inner Tex Avery.



2 Comments:
I agree with the Tex Avery remark. Man, when I read this I was thinking "that's a Looney Toon...specially the bottom middle frame." I loved this one.
August 29, 2007 6:19 AMLove the BONG!!!
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